from a dust covered bin
words register well
against the echo of silence
yet senses grapple for meaning
these verses say too many things
yet reveal nothing
truth sprung up from doubt
lies suspended
where guilt has left it
reclaiming confessions in vain
made aware
that we needed to see angels
to carry on with our faith
against the echo of silence
yet senses grapple for meaning
these verses say too many things
yet reveal nothing
truth sprung up from doubt
lies suspended
where guilt has left it
reclaiming confessions in vain
made aware
that we needed to see angels
to carry on with our faith
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5:11 p. m.
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i need to see more than angels to have faith.
i wish i could write poetry too. i envy you people.
bismuth - sometimes we should just let go of our guilt. it can be more liberating than the revelation of certain truths.
slim whale - just write the first faint line and the rest shall continue ... Ü
the first faint line you speak of, it's too faint it escapes me. every time.
ennui--i agree with mussolini. hehe
you don't have to agree slimwhale. agreeing is nothing. nada. no sense.
and the hehe? it's almost like "i agree." there's nothing to it than mere waste of space.
slim, envy ennui and trans.
ennui, someday i will. and i agree about the liberation bit.
il duce, was your comment for ennui or me? and this sem sucks. it only reinforced my laziness.
anonymous, don't be rude. if you can't attach your identity to your comment, get lost.
Absolutely great lines:
that we needed to see angels
to carry on with our faith
bismuth, if i start attaching my 'identity' to my post then all of you should, don't you think??? What is slimwhale? The attempt at irony is nothing but that -- an attempt. How pathetic.
And what do think of'ennui'? are you even sure its mussolini posting here???? And what the hell is :..m..:??? Is the letter M an identity for you?
Before you demand, define.
Before you define, think.
My identity: the letters A, N, O, N, Y, M, O, U, S. This is even more concrete than a bismuth, don't you think?
man, you're so dense. and a coward too; hiding behind the security of anonymity. ano ka? putok sa buho? if you don't get that, take this: go fuck a blind cow! perhaps you'd find the irony in that amusing.
have you been fucked by a blind cow, bismuth? did it hurt?
or have you fucked a blind cow? were your eyes closed, as closed as your mind?
mooooooo. fuck me i'm an anonymous cow. moooooooo.
bismuth--trans and ennui already know that i adore them.
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