miércoles, julio 12, 2006

poetry reading

all the men i've ever dated never ordered hot coffee, always the frothy frappe kind for them. why is that?
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i remember late one sunday afternoon, at a coffee kiosk in the middle of an orchid garden- you and i fighting off sleep. we were together since the previous night with nowhere to go.

people pass by with their grocery bags and lives to go home to. this is our home- transient afternoons like this one , with money enough for two coffees, one cold and sweet, the other hot and strong.

you listen to me read the poems i wrote for you. the little notebook with scribbles painstakenly penned in handwritng you might be able to read, was a little worn from the countless times we leafed through its pages.

and the afternoon wore on. the barista asked if we wanted more water and a fresh ashtray. he had to ask twice. i was reading you, "there would be times when i would look at you and think the world is you."

and perhaps in some sunday afternoons, you still wonder if that were ever true.

11 comentarios:

Blogger ennui ha dicho...

"all the men i've ever dated never ordered hot coffee, always the frothy frappe kind for them."


---> i was never one who enjoyed the frothy, frappe type of coffee concoctions. only 3 reasons come to mind:

1. i'm watching my sugar consumption
2. my mind is complicated as it is, i want everything else undeniably basic.
3. hot coffee is CHEAPER.

my advice, dear bismuth, is for you to automatically order hot coffee for your future date and watch his reaction. if he can't handle anything that strong, chances are he can't handle you either.

3:26 a. m.  
Blogger bismuth ha dicho...

good point. but i want a man who would order coffee for both of us. life is complicated even in the coffeeshop. ugh.

11:44 a. m.  
Blogger ennui ha dicho...

it's a fucking tightrope bismuth, a fucking tightrope.

4:19 p. m.  
Blogger ... ha dicho...

Interesting question. Ordering a pseudo-clever coffee reminds me of a scene in every movie where the clock reads 4:20. It becomes all too cliché. It’d be funny if you, heordered black every time.

Oh, and powerfully lovely words you’ve spun and asked.

3:18 p. m.  
Blogger bismuth ha dicho...

trans rev: (because i still do not know how to call you. labelled you as "lawyer" in the links by the way.)

thanks for all the kind words. i read your stuff. wow. you're great! and i'm not saying this just to return the favor. that freedom post! reminded me of my own dream to someday drive a mustang with its top down, along a winding hillside road. cogon flowers in bloom and america's ventura highway blasting off from the radio. but i have already deviated from my point.

coffee. why is that really?

5:44 p. m.  
Blogger paningit ha dicho...

because it's too damn hot to drink hot coffee in your city that's why.

4:59 p. m.  
Blogger bismuth ha dicho...

hey you're back. and i guess it's as simple as that.

1:45 p. m.  
Blogger ... ha dicho...

I'm going to second CJ's prodding for you to write more. You definitely should. You're too smart, funny and clever not to. I read a lot of your stuff, and I'm still chuckling over that remark about babies being sneaky and creepy.

Also, you can just copy and paste that symbol thingie I use if you want.

9:51 p. m.  
Blogger bismuth ha dicho...

Ô¿Ô: yeah copy and paste. why didn't i think of that? thanks for the compliment.

1:20 p. m.  
Blogger Ingrid C. ha dicho...

i worship your prose, but i cannot, FOR THE LOVE OF FIDEL CASTRO, read your penmanship. wala lang.

8:36 p. m.  
Blogger Russell CJ Duffy ha dicho...

even murakami would envy this

12:36 a. m.  

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